Here's another poem for y'all, you'll tell me what you think. I can't really swipe, but I believe it's the next half of the page.

I like this poem actually. It means like you're just living your life and just you gotta pass some obstacles that you don't usually come across and like sometimes them obstacles are a breeze and sometimes them obstacles are not a breeze and like like it pushes you back more, like, and you want to go more into the future.

Yo, actually, comment from someone else who writes poems like I do write poems too. Like, this is okay good. Like, this is good. This is W-pound right here. I love you all.

For real love this poem, as someone who would write poetry about what they've been through, 10 out of 10 poem, I most definitely would have cried if it weren't for the fact that I feel nothing, cut my life into a piece, no, but for real this poem, amazing, and if it wasn't for for the fact that I thought farther was the word far. Um, it would have been way better. a good 9.5 out of 10.

You did a great job using poetic devices, the repetition, the metaphor. The sentiment is really special. I can see what you're trying to say and it's kind of sad, but I like it. You did a great job.

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Eugh. Eugh. Eugh. Eugh.

i think poetry is great and uh i guess at some points poetry can be cringy and that's all that people who aren't into poetry see so they kind of think that any poetry is like cringy and they don't read it but like breathe take some fucking time to read it and understand it if you can't understand it then you're retarded and just scroll get away you don't have to be a bitch just shut the fuck up nobody wants to hear it