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All right, all right, it's not bad. It's not bad. It definitely could be worse You're using a lot of the same writing rhyming sounds at the end. It's okay to mix it up It's okay If the words don't rhyme use a little bit more figurative language like alliteration and repetition and all of that And I think you you'd have some some good shit. I like the language it could definitely be better, but it's not bad I like it

The main reason why I make like everything rhymes. It's like just something that I do. I don't know I just really like making every word rhyme Because it's like more challenging that way if that makes sense

This one is called Burnt Bridges. I walked on a brick road covered with stones made from nature and bones. I made a bridge to reach you. A bridge made of fools. I felt the wind, water, waves. I saw the sunrise. rise. I saw the moon wane as it fills across the sky. I was digging my grave.

I finished that bridge one day. It was weaker with pain, pain from the wind, water and waves, burnt bridges, bricks and bones. I felt the bridge fall one night. Flames and fire, it was dire, it was a long fight.

The stones fell, waves crashed from the shore, emotions left at the front door, emotions of despair. You made me stronger. I can build better bridges that don't burn or crumble from wind, water, and waves.

I mean, it's kind of explanatory. So if you're explanatory, just read the fucking name. Burn bridges. Burning bridges. You know what I mean? It's not that complicated. It's an alright one. Definitely had better ones out there.

Um, what? What?

It's not a song, it's a fucking poem. You think I can sing? I got my retainers in, but like, even without them. No, honey boo boo. I couldn't. I'm glad you like it though.

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