Hey everyone is in this year I just made my very first song come nice and slow please check it out and give me constructive criticism because I'm trying to improve on the Alisal and have a nice day peace and love

Why is this so good? Like, it's so good. I can listen to that on repeat for hours. That was so good your dog

honestly I think this is pretty solid I ain't going to lie like I hear what you're trying to make the music the gender you're going for so I do recommend just adding a little more lyrics into it because if you're going with the beat you're gonna nice boys and everything and then I don't hear like so much out of something like that I like I think you're the natural boys on it so I was there you're doing good I give you solid like seven out of ten you feel me like I've been listening to a lot of music like this.