It's not bad, it's actually pretty good. You just, um, need a different beat, but like, it would sound better if, like, yeah, they had a different beat, but, like, you need to say, like, more stuff, you know. Don't try to rhyme, just, you know, say anything that comes at you, the top of your head, you know, that may sound good. Doesn't have to rhyme, you know.